Anyone who gives this 5 star is a liar. The grammar is horrible, and the characters are idiots. Nobody acts their age, especially the MC. He’s supposedly millions of years old, yet he acts like an idiot. Not to mention, he’s a borderline retard. He lived for that long, but doesn’t have any skills. He cant even do basic high school math. Not to mention the hypocrisy of the MC. He complains about villains in story books acting arrogant, yet he acts the exact same way? Anyways, like I said, whoever gives this 5 stars is either a liar, or has never read a hood novel in their life.
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Thanks I will try to correct that but I do have something on that maths thing, as I feel like you will not read this book further a spoiler, he has never gone to school on earth till he was 200 year old. And he hates maths so he rarely studied it. And it will be revealed later on very long. And the grammar part I know I am trying. But thank you nothing less.
oh! it seems like I didn't see something... You see our mc has a lot of fighting skills you will see it in the future, and as for the childish behavior I have explanations for that as well, you see he spent his all time cultivating and as someone who started to be in seclusion from the age of 14 what do you expect. And one more thing the people who are broken inside and I mean really broken down do some childish things I don't know about others but I know about myself. As someone who has jumped from the 5th floor in attempt of suside and survived now this is my personality. And I am not a teenager or some child. Oh for the arrogant part, if you know that someone is playing with you and will never kill you is your friend you can be arrogant in front of him, and in my further writing you will see mc acts as a slave to save his life. So don't worry although my grammar may be bad, I mean what I write so he is not arrogant enough to loose his life.
Let me get that right you sent a 200 old mc to school. I am speechless.
yes sir I did
harem?
who does not like harem Then check out Life Simulation: Rage Of Gods You will like it. It got a good story, world background, and all, but little low in language mistakes. Give it a try
Yep, and he was able to develop a system AI while rarely studying math. Although fantasy, there is a limit to how unreasonable you can be.
Who said he needed maths for that... Obviously I will discuss how he made the system but that's in the later part of the story..... Thought thank you for checking this book out.
