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2022-09-19 03:02

just binge read the whole thing. I love it and am very excited to read more. the story is smart and entertaining. the characters are well developed and fun to listen to. the story has good pacing from moment to moment, nothing jarring or disconnected. besides a couple grammar or sentence structure problems it's very well written. the world's creation is developed steadily throughout the chapters and I'm excited to learn more about the world in the future. the info dumps are minor and quick to read through which I really appreciate, they provide useful information in the moment and don't bog down the story with long history. I've enjoyed where the story is going so far and am looking forward to where it goes in the future! keep up the amazing work author! I will keep an eye out for new chapters.

You Might Die If I Cast My Healing Spell

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bit too early to determine how things go, but looks good for now. other people also have ridiculous talents, doesn't appear to just be a one sided curbstomp. you get the idea. in short it doesn't really show off any flaws at this time.

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Immortal_Soul_King
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Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support

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Davros92
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Basically the MC can also fly. I could explain but I kind of got lazy. Speaking of laziness, does this massage thing really work? There's always in the cinema how something that relaxes you doesn't seem to have much effect without medicine. Like a placebo. Going back to this MC is that he can cause a sleeping person to become more tense. Like a demonic villain where instead of relaxing each period of sleep only causes more pain, fatigue and discomfort.

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asaade
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not even 20 chapters and there's already a young master cliche wew not even 20 chapters and there's already a young master cliche wew not even 20 chapters and there's already a young master cliche wew not even 20 chapters and there's already a young master cliche wew

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NeonPLay250
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Bro how is every book in the top so mid. The author is inconsistent I couldn’t even make it 4 chapters it’ so mid

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This book is bad and I mean bad I thought it would be good and not much is written about healers but no this story was a trash story.

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