Superb storytelling,the setting is refined,the detail is refined and the intense of each stanza is like a fresh patch of dopamine thats keeps the reader in high suspense.There is a tiny bit of grammatically but those can be reworked easily.Overrall a good hook and a good writing continue to pursue greater heights with my full support!
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