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Transmigrated In DXD With Dark Multiverse Gacha System
VoidShiro
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is it so hard to understand? Literally 2 words to describe the problem of the story. It is recommended that a paragraph does not exceed 4 sentences; likewise, 1 sentence must have semicolons. In addition, there are problems separating the dialogue from the characters. It would be nice, understandable and orderly if you separate the interaction of each character in different paragraphs.
VoidShiro:Huh... So you are one of those. Such a sad existence. I truly feel for you. Your life must suck. Really - who writes that and does not tell me - WHY?image
Do not give so much importance to the author, after all, there will always be people who, regardless of whether the story is good or bad, will always say nonsense to be able to screw up the work of others. Until now, although it is true that it has not been better, it's still a job that can improve a lot depending on how you execute it.... I'll be supporting your story in future chapters. thanks for the work
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