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FunnyBuns
FunnyBunsLv152yr
2022-09-30 18:42

Honestly it is not bad, unfortunately only the power system exclusive to fairies is explained, the universal method of mana recieves no explanation by the author and even what should be an accurate guess based on vague mentions the author throws out the window by introducing something new and exclusive to the MC. It is a nice story unfortunately the author really has a tendency to not really explain much, this is the biggest example but not really the only thing that lacked any explanation.

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_oinkchan
_oinkchanAuthor

It's more of a romance and face-slapping story that concentrates on the mc.

FunnyBuns
FunnyBunsLv15

That isn't really an excuse to not explain things, you just throw them in story, refuse to explain and call it a day. Rather than what you said this is more a wish fulfillment power trip.

_oinkchan:It's more of a romance and face-slapping story that concentrates on the mc.
_oinkchan
_oinkchanAuthor

Tbh I read your review rn... There is no universal method for mana actually in the novel . No cores or stages.

FunnyBuns:That isn't really an excuse to not explain things, you just throw them in story, refuse to explain and call it a day. Rather than what you said this is more a wish fulfillment power trip.
FunnyBuns
FunnyBunsLv15

In the end that is just one example of you introducing something and not explaining it at all leaving others guessing.

_oinkchan:Tbh I read your review rn... There is no universal method for mana actually in the novel . No cores or stages.
_oinkchan
_oinkchanAuthor

No I admit it that I did not put mana explanations.

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_oinkchan
_oinkchanAuthor

Since I did not explain to the readers in the book. For those in the Lower World to ascend, need to create a mana core. Currently, most have no mana cores. In the celestial realm, there are 9 known magic tiers and each has three stages, Early, Peak and Perfection. Actually, in the previous version, I have made an auxiliary chapter to explain quite a few things.

FunnyBuns:In the end that is just one example of you introducing something and not explaining it at all leaving others guessing.
FunnyBuns
FunnyBunsLv15

Am I speaking to two different people, like why the F did you say in your previous comment that there were no rankings and now in this comment you are saying there are and even explained it.

_oinkchan:Since I did not explain to the readers in the book. For those in the Lower World to ascend, need to create a mana core. Currently, most have no mana cores. In the celestial realm, there are 9 known magic tiers and each has three stages, Early, Peak and Perfection. Actually, in the previous version, I have made an auxiliary chapter to explain quite a few things.
_oinkchan
_oinkchanAuthor

Cuz I made it up.

FunnyBuns:Am I speaking to two different people, like why the F did you say in your previous comment that there were no rankings and now in this comment you are saying there are and even explained it.
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_oinkchan
_oinkchanAuthor

Hey I have given an explanation in the latest chapter. 😘 Enjoy.

PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

The author is bipolar

FunnyBuns:Am I speaking to two different people, like why the F did you say in your previous comment that there were no rankings and now in this comment you are saying there are and even explained it.
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Depraved_Chap
Depraved_ChapLv13

We do a little tRoLliNg

_oinkchan:Cuz I made it up.
Ireallylikereading
IreallylikereadingLv4

the best plans are the ones made at the spot, just like this kids white teeth.

_oinkchan:Cuz I made it up.
_oinkchan
_oinkchanAuthor

Fr. Now it has actually become a part of the novel too.

Ireallylikereading:the best plans are the ones made at the spot, just like this kids white teeth.
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