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Review Detail of Blazing_1NS4N1TY in Harem God: Leveling Up Yanderes in the Apocalypse

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This book is the epitome of the "too much of a good thing" saying. The book starts off fantastic and keeps getting better. It is well written, character interactions are fun and entertaining and there is solid world building. The issue (imo) stems from the attempt to ensure that the women are allowed to shine, which in and of itself is awesome. This starts out very well, with the limitations placed on the Mc being logically thought out and well written. Unfortunately, these limitations are leaned into far too much, making the Mc seem almost fake and like an extra written in after the fact. After awhile, dialogue between characters becomes forced and contrived. Honestly, the issue probably seems as glaring as it does due to the high expectations brought on by the strong start. Overall, the writing quality is great, the plot line is great, and the only problem is a slight character deviation that snowballed into a bigger issue.

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Harem God: Leveling Up Yanderes in the Apocalypse

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