Review Detail of kartik_agarwal in Harem God: Leveling Up Yanderes in the Apocalypse

it could have been a good novel, if not for the author screwing it up. I liked the personalities of mc and his first three harem members. Even though gods are shown as too bored, gasping over smallest action of mc, it was still okay as it gave more attention on mc. But the awful writing style of author ruined it. Too much talking, and too much nonsensical words are used to show emotions of people. It shows how author doesn't have tiny bit of subtlety while showing story, and thinking that adding lots of adjective will make it interesting. rather, I stopped reading because of it.