This is interesting and a bit tensed up. I like how you make your dialogue flow accordingly. The phrase and other sentenced use are so accurate. Keep it up. i will be expecting the next chapter.
maylily_jk
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Thank you for your review đ hope you will add the story in your Library and look forward to the coming chapters.
You're welcome đ and please read Mine and also make a review. Thanks