An interesting plot although there are some sentences that confused me. For example, 'how did she tell me that to me' this looks unfitting so I guess you mean 'how could she do that to me?' or 'how could she lie to me?'. I'm the type of person who always bothered with this kind of thing but I could understand since the author is still new. Take your time and keep it up authoršš»
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