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I really liked the story and it was going in the right direction but the MC got way too OP. Their existance value was just ridiculous! I dropped because at that point whats the point of the story but I wish you rewrite it! I dont mind and OP MC but it still has to be reasonable to work. She should not be able to beat Milim at all and only when shes nearing full potential shd she be able too
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Forgot to add this but this story is basically just the base for future stories, so it is meant to be quite bland with an overly overpowered mc
Enjoyed:That's what I am going to do! Thanks for the review and I totally agree. I personally like op MCs especially since it fits with tensura but I went quite overboard. I think I have stated before that I am going to rewrite the story without [Gods will]. You can leave if you want or wait until the remake when I will 1. be a better writer 2. characters will have more expression 3. The MC will fit the scaling of Tensura.
That's what I am going to do! Thanks for the review and I totally agree. I personally like op MCs especially since it fits with tensura but I went quite overboard. I think I have stated before that I am going to rewrite the story without [Gods will]. You can leave if you want or wait until the remake when I will 1. be a better writer 2. characters will have more expression 3. The MC will fit the scaling of Tensura.