Review Detail of yato_med in I am Invincible; Literally [One Punch Man in Marvel]
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I know you're a Watch one punch man. But you're misunderstanding Saitama He's not stupid at all, he just doesn't care. So don't try to make him stupid, this makes the novel annoying.
I am Invincible; Literally [One Punch Man in Marvel]
ManofcultureQ_Q
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bro, he's right. you literally addressed Saitama as s2pid in ur own review. So you really thought he is. Just admit it and move on, admitting can be sign of improving too, good luck.
ManofcultureQ_Q:Really now? I'd advise you to go and read my review. There, you will clearly see what I have written. I have already told that MC would have some traits that are going to be different from Saitama, his stupidity being one of them. I didn't think of Saitama as an idiot from the beginning, but I purposely made my MC an idiot, as it would be easier for me to write. 'Writing a smart character is tough, but a stupid MC is far easier.' — That was what went through my head when I decided to write a story in a setting like Marvel. I would advise you to not call someone stupid on your own assumptions, because that just makes you seem like an amateur person. Thank you.
Thanks for your review. Now, about what you typed, Jason is not a perfect copy of Saitama. As I said in my review, he will have certain traits that will be different. Saitama might not be stupid, but Jason IS stupid. He will not be stupid forever though, at least not entirely. There are many things about Jason that differ from Saitama, so he is not COMPLETELY Saitama. You can say their personalities are similar but they are two different individuals. Don't worry. He will not stay stupid...at least not entirely. You can say he will act like a proper person in the future. Peace✌️
ManofcultureQ_Q:Thanks for your review. Now, about what you typed, Jason is not a perfect copy of Saitama. As I said in my review, he will have certain traits that will be different. Saitama might not be stupid, but Jason IS stupid. He will not be stupid forever though, at least not entirely. There are many things about Jason that differ from Saitama, so he is not COMPLETELY Saitama. You can say their personalities are similar but they are two different individuals. Don't worry. He will not stay stupid...at least not entirely. You can say he will act like a proper person in the future. Peace✌️
Odds are, you thought Saitama was stupid and decided to make your mc stupid. I guess rewriting stuff would be too much work though, so you decided to explain it off as if he's different from Saitama. Don't make it seem like that was your original plan, it makes you seem just like your character.
ManofcultureQ_Q:Your welcome but not your welcome
Really now? I'd advise you to go and read my review. There, you will clearly see what I have written. I have already told that MC would have some traits that are going to be different from Saitama, his stupidity being one of them. I didn't think of Saitama as an idiot from the beginning, but I purposely made my MC an idiot, as it would be easier for me to write. 'Writing a smart character is tough, but a stupid MC is far easier.' — That was what went through my head when I decided to write a story in a setting like Marvel. I would advise you to not call someone stupid on your own assumptions, because that just makes you seem like an amateur person. Thank you.
WaitWhoWhat:Odds are, you thought Saitama was stupid and decided to make your mc stupid. I guess rewriting stuff would be too much work though, so you decided to explain it off as if he's different from Saitama. Don't make it seem like that was your original plan, it makes you seem just like your character.
I recently read my comment and saw it myself. Then I once again commented about it, saying that I reread it again and called myself dumb in that. After that, I deleted it because that would have accelerated this thing. So yeah, I admit I didn't read my comment myself. I still admit that I already typed about my MC being Stupid though, so if people are coming to read this, they should know what they are getting into.
PlusEighTeen:bro, he's right. you literally addressed Saitama as s2pid in ur own review. So you really thought he is. Just admit it and move on, admitting can be sign of improving too, good luck.
It's cool, I'm not railing on you for making him dumb when you stated he would be. I just thought being honest about it would be better than writing it off as a difference in character.
ManofcultureQ_Q:I recently read my comment and saw it myself. Then I once again commented about it, saying that I reread it again and called myself dumb in that. After that, I deleted it because that would have accelerated this thing. So yeah, I admit I didn't read my comment myself. I still admit that I already typed about my MC being Stupid though, so if people are coming to read this, they should know what they are getting into.