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x_ChaosFeedz_xLv32yr
2022-10-28 11:16

I couldn't bring myself to keep reading this badly translated novel that due to how it's translated feels like a mtl(most likely is) I can't read this I'm out. from comments on the other novels it seems this author has a problem translating novels idk if they are copy pasting mtls and claiming as their own or what in addition to that I'm pretty sure I remember seeing 1-3 star reviews before when I tried to read this once on wn so I tried reading again. now I'm confused at how there is no 1star reviews and mostly only 5 or 4 stars (if you think this is worthy of those star with its current quality then something wrong with you "cough BOTS cough")looks like either deleted all reviews below 3 star or a repost of the novel. while the idea is something I've not seen much of the mtl quality tl has ruined this novel in every category this novel unless it has a massive cleaning to fix the quality of the tl will only ever be worth 1 star or a max of 2 for me if I wanna read a mtl that destroys my brain cells I'll go to read mtls

I Spread The Pokemon All Over The World

ylmoll
3.9
76 Chs

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ylmoll
ylmollAuthor

thx for your revieuw !!! i dont delete the other revieuws so i dont know where ypu got that from ! and yes english isnt my main language so the translatiins arent good! im trying to fix that ! i have started taking classes and im looking for some translators who can double/trippel check the translations ! i hope you just have some patience!

2yr
Radioactive_Noodle
Radioactive_NoodleLv3

what is your main language? usually if its not mandarin, arabic, japanese, chinese or any language wich one letter has many meanings it should be easier to translate.

ylmoll:thx for your revieuw !!! i dont delete the other revieuws so i dont know where ypu got that from ! and yes english isnt my main language so the translatiins arent good! im trying to fix that ! i have started taking classes and im looking for some translators who can double/trippel check the translations ! i hope you just have some patience!
2yr
Radioactive_Noodle
Radioactive_NoodleLv3

heck in my main language arabic has words that don't even exist in my language

ylmoll:thx for your revieuw !!! i dont delete the other revieuws so i dont know where ypu got that from ! and yes english isnt my main language so the translatiins arent good! im trying to fix that ! i have started taking classes and im looking for some translators who can double/trippel check the translations ! i hope you just have some patience!
2yr
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ylmoll
ylmollAuthor

I hope you all enjoy it as much as I enjoyed writing it! Don't forget to comment and rate! I love feedback and my reader's reactions. You guys inspire me to write more.

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ArthurDragneel
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Haven't read it yet but the concept is kinda new and different. I hope the translation is good enough. If I don't find it good I'll delete this review

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ScrambledEgg
ScrambledEggLv3

The story is good, but the racism and patriotism destroy everything, maybe you need to skip or rewrite some chapter, especially about Zygarde and Yveltal attacks to other countries (the usual Chinese vibe). At least, make them fell sad about what happened. felling happy about the destruction of a city in another country is inhumanand and unacceptable, even though they hate that country. Aside from that, the story is acceptable.

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carlos_boral
carlos_boralLv1

This good especially when you have watched pokemon as it brings back nostalgia and isn't really as boring as other pokemon fanfic that takes place in the pokemon world since you probably know the flow goes if you ever played a pokemon game

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Alex_Carvajal
Alex_CarvajalLv1

Reveal spoiler

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Artifac
ArtifacLv11

Very interesting concept bringing pokemon to a world that doesn't know them, enjoying the chapters so far, also love the shenanigans with the first 3 trainers.

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StarGod
StarGodLv11

I don't know what happened, but now, starting from chapter 10, I can't finish reading the rest of the chapter, as the website says I need to download the app to continue (I was already at chapter 60).

2yr
AwfulAbsoluteSweet
AwfulAbsoluteSweetLv4

This really feels Chinese…and I mean in every respect. I simply can’t stand how the author constantly misuses “he” and “she,” but even more so when they write proverbs or idioms and don’t clarify their meaning. The idiom will then continue into another paragraph where it completely disrupts the flow because the reader has no idea what is meant by the word. Not really disappointed bc this is what I expect coming into the story.

2yr
Primordial_God
Primordial_GodLv6

If you can improve your English writing or your translation capability, this novel will be much more than this. It has so much potential but is hindered by your English writing. I hope you can improve it. I don’t even know proper character names.

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