this is great, there are only a few small translation mistakes and the story us great although I think the story could be faster if the author stop dragging it out with conversation but it is good nonetheless, the story is engaging and not like the other ff where the mc always take the spotlight or a guy who wants to create a harem and thus always flirts with the girls. The story is good and I hope that the author will now just give a short summary about fight that is not really important for example the rebels at alabasta it would've been much faster if the author just said that they defeated the rebels and captured the cp agent after luffy use the conquerors haki on them and then proceed to the scene where they made him his double agent. anyway author I really like your ff and I hope u won't dropped itđđ¤
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