The mc is just a fanboy hayzz Having to babysit its boring he just follow luffy and making small changes i rather watch the anime. Its boring as f***

I don't understand why such a low rating, this fanfic can't be the best, but it's not bad either, for someone who is a fan it's well done. Author just keep writing because for now the story is fine, I just hope everything is not exactly the same as canon in the future.

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just another braindead onepiece ff which follows the strawhats, dont waste your time and read the original, lazy. ..........................

yeah, nothing new in this fic same old harem with an all-knowing idiot who has a problem for every solution... . . . . . . . . . . . . .

read the manga instead of reading this fic. it's basically just the mc following luffy and changing small things along the way..............

It’s just the original story with an additional crew mate. The story is unchanged so you can pretty much see where its heading. The writing is lacking and unimproving, probably because most of the readers are half-brains or unconcerned with helping the author improve. The writing style is amateurish and linear, not so different from a textbook. Too much telling and no showing, an obvious result of limited, if not none at all, exposure to fine literature. Example: “Woah!! We’ve landed!” said Luffy in joy. This is an excellent example of bad story writing. Instead of showing emotions, you instead chose to tell them. Mistakes like these are unforgivable, if not telling. Many people have defaulted to using the excuse of “English isn’t my main language” forgetting that story writing and deciphering is taught in all languages. You all know this. You’ve written exams and tests where questions like: How is “insert name” feeling in this passage? Explain the reason for stating so in the previous question? Elementary, Junior High, and High School. Grammar and tense inconsistency could be excused, anything else? No!!

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I'm giving this a 5 stars for reasons some people don't like it. I prefer stories I can watch the series alongside with instead of those with authors who desperately try to come up with their own thing, only to fail miserably, butchering the essense of the source material. It would've been frustrating if this wasn't a One Piece fanfic but an SI following the Strawhats on their journey is always a good thing.