Review Detail of Yuri_is_Life in Transmigrating Into Diffetent Worlds 2

1) The grammar is terrible. Let's take a look at the first paragraph of the second arс. "Lu Xie opened her eyes she was lying on a velvet king bed the room was dark only a little sunlight is seen on the slight crack of the curtain. She stood walked towards the window and opened the curtains." The author does not know what commas and dots are? 2) It's more like a matter of personal preferences, but your Girls' Love is more like M+F. In the 1st arc, MC is alpha, and calls herself "husband". In second arc, she lived all her life under disguise of guy.