Review Detail of empressblackrose09 in The Whiskey King(Sample)

I will give my honest review here. The plot is okay but, sorry for my word but it's a bit bland at the beginning. I like the ML actually because he is a pretty straightforward person for me, as well as the FL that seems like a feisty one and won't back down in any fight. As for the paragraphs, might as well you cut some of them or divide it because there are a lot of confusing conversations there and sometimes I can't follow T_T Your synopsis, might as well revise it into some mystery element about it, like... put some excerpt on it like a trailer chapter that would make the readers would want to read more. ^_^ This has a potential. Just revise some of your scenes that would make an impact to the readers. ^_^ Keep writing! ^_^