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empressblackrose09
empressblackrose09Lv42yr
2022-08-12 06:42

I will give my honest review here. The plot is okay but, sorry for my word but it's a bit bland at the beginning. I like the ML actually because he is a pretty straightforward person for me, as well as the FL that seems like a feisty one and won't back down in any fight. As for the paragraphs, might as well you cut some of them or divide it because there are a lot of confusing conversations there and sometimes I can't follow T_T Your synopsis, might as well revise it into some mystery element about it, like... put some excerpt on it like a trailer chapter that would make the readers would want to read more. ^_^ This has a potential. Just revise some of your scenes that would make an impact to the readers. ^_^ Keep writing! ^_^

The Whiskey King(Sample)

_planetofzombies
4.6
7 Chs

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_planetofzombiesAuthor

Thank you so much, I actually like when people let me know about my mistakes. I know there lots of grammatical mistakes . I will edit the book and revise the mistakes once I will complete the book.☺️💕❣️

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_Rockbison_
_Rockbison_Lv3

Woo~ liked the conference of the ML Luca.... Also the devilish character of him.....l really like when ML give us such an attitude 😜😉 Also FL is nice and feisty..... Looking forward to the upcoming chapters.... Keep going author and all the best for ur novel..

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Holy_mackrel
Holy_mackrelLv13

I will highlight a few points for those who are looking to read this book to help you out. The characters - the characters are well written. I like how direct the ML is and how confident he is. He is a direct man who knows what he is doing most of the time and seems competent. Writing - it is good enough to understand. Some paragraphs are too big and wordy which makes it difficult to tell who is speaking what. But this is something you'll not notice once you get past the first chapter. World Background - it seemed interesting but I'll need to read a little more before making any judgement on it.

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blossoms_hkhk
blossoms_hkhkLv11

The synopsis is intriguing. I read few chapters and I enjoyed reading it. The story and characters both are interesting. Looking forward to more chapters. Good work author. 👍

2yr
Jennifer_6047
Jennifer_6047Lv1

Really love this! The story moves fast so you don't to worry about big long boring fillers. It definitely keeps you on your toes and coming back for more!

2yr
Adeyanju_Faith
Adeyanju_FaithLv1

I love the flow of the characters. it really goes well. You have a great highlight and interesting story. You're highly recommend 👏👏 Keep it up author you will get there

2yr
DaoistNotAvilable
DaoistNotAvilableLv1

The characters and the way their chemistry is building up is very interesting and exciting. Both of them have their own traits, and I like the way the FL does not lose her feisty-ness before the ML. Good work.

2yr
Marianne_2020
Marianne_2020Lv4

I'm going to be very frank, I wasn't expecting this, the title got me wondering but I'm glad I did read it. it was fun and amazing, I love the ml and the fast pace as well. nice work author.

2yr
wookie0_
wookie0_Lv2

I enjoyed the story well done author character has depth, pacing is good, no glaring mistakes keep posting and do not give up. Let's hit 100 chapters and please post 7 chps a week atleast for us readers

2yr
Moonwriting
MoonwritingLv4

The book is so good I can't stop myself I want to read every chapter. The book is a promising read and contains well define charters. Good job author......

2yr
maylily_jk
maylily_jkLv2

The beginning of the story is very interesting. I liked the characters as well. I really enjoyed reading your story so I am looking forward to read more chapters in the future.😊

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