Well thought out and beautifully executed.. It's even better that you are not restricted by canon and are creative enough to show us the effects of your actions on canon. The life you bring to the characters and the believability of their personalities it just awesome. The atmosphere in Konoha and the sneakiness of the top branch is just perfect considering the potential of the MC.. You did a wonderful job with Hinata and the Hyuga clan as a whole. I'm anticipating what you have in store for Naruto as well and I'm pretty certain that I won't be disappointed... I do hope you finish this one though..
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