Review Detail of DaisukiDayoSenpai in I will not die a Villainess's death

Item: I will not die a Villainess's death
Rating: 5

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DaisukiDayoSenpaiLv121yrDaisukiDayoSenpai

A pretty solid book all throughout although it is not my cup of tea. Grammar and punctuation are on point, I didn't notice any mistakes there and the pacing is overall decent. It was a nice read! Good job author, I can tell that this novel will blow up soon!

I will not die a Villainess's death

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TK4TopytoLv14TK4Topyto

There are lots of mistakes, atleast in the fisrt 50ch. From weird to funny, just to name a few: like petrol used instead of patrol, finance instead fiance. For me its feels like editing was rushed. Some sentences are weirdly worded too.

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