Review Detail of Yvonne_Jemutai in Helvica_43: HIATUS

I've got to be honest, I didn't get much by reading. I like your humor and your language is great. I can even guess where you're from. But your paragraphing is kind of weird and it's hard to tell the conversations, so please do work on that. Anyways, all the best and find a catchy, cover, please, it works more just like a good synopsis.