webnovel
Daoist0ccPtW
Daoist0ccPtWLv142yr
2022-11-08 20:18

The story is excellent, but there was an error or lack of experience in the development of the mc. First of all, I emphasize, I have no prejudice with the MC's sexual choice. The author's pragmatic choice would be to avoid controversial themes throughout history, of course, if the author intends to pursue a career in this sector. You must be thinking, why would I do that? The answer is in some comments, your book is excellent, it had the potential to be at the top of this site, but lost a large reader base. There's a reason why discussions about controversial topics are always avoided by politicians haha

Liked it!

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
Related Stories

My SSS-Rank Class Is Blood Monarch!

'Divinity Online'. The new breakthrough in the Full-Immersion Virtual Reality technology. After decades of work, Divinity Corp had achieved the impossible. Creating a massive video game world that people can enter and live in as if it were Earth. Their goal was clear, to create a world other than Earth that we can call home. A place where the laws of reality vanish, and the true ceiling of power shifts completely. Naturally, the shockwave Divinity Online created across the entire globe was unlike anything else. Every single person has heard of it, even those who have had no interest in video games before. Giant corporations and even governments immediately rushed to start planning to invest in this new world and just like that, billions of people had their eyes on one single date: the 19th of July. *** Arthur, like everyone else, had heard of the game and was as excited as everyone else to try it, if not even more. With how much he grew bored of his life on earth, this fantasy world was like the divine call he had been searching for. However, there was a very small problem. He had no money to buy the machine required to access Divinity Online. His wretched life had turned him into a broke teenager with no parents, and no relatives. But, by some kind of luck, he got his hands on one of those machines. Not knowing what was awaiting him in that world, Arthur was simply seeking one thing... A new opportunity in life and to find a purpose he could work for when he had none so far. [Welcome to 'Divinity Online'.] [Assimilation Started...]

Frost_Bite8 · Fantasy
4.2
178 Chs