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DAMM_SCHOOL
DAMM_SCHOOLLv12yr
2022-12-06 06:08

Personally i was expecting to see an overpowered mc but alas, at the beginning it seemed like the mc would be op but the author seems to have forgotten about other abilities except ´Eyes of Incubus´, the mc almost died to 5th tier monster at 4th tier and by that i mean he was completely crused, he wasn´t able to put up a fight even tho he was the so called ´creater´ his bloodline i mean, honestly it was disappointing but i really liked the plot it self not including having 2 MCś (3.4) i couldn´t bring my self to give it any lower... anyway thanks for reading all the way here

Sin and Virtue System

Oskar_04
4.1
186 Chs

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Oskar_04
Oskar_04Author

Thanks for taking time and your review 🙌. i will definitely work on that and put more effort to not forget abilities 😅

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Oskar_04
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obviously, as the author of this book I am giving it 5 stars! I always wanted to write evil character, especially an character which turned evil. I definitely recommend you to give it a try, and consider giving a power stone for WPC. also not a spoiler, but the novel is not only about the MC, the world will revolve around many other characters. also I will be uploading two novels simultaneously so please show some support. - a wannabe writer Oskar

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BigCrow
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Review after 24 chapters. Inshort: Overall a good read, should give it a try if you like demon mc like novels. Detailed: The premise is unique, there are very few novels with dual system holders and the author has kept it balanced till now. The writing quality is good, could be better. Lacks in character design and world background but fills the gap with intersting story. Action is fine, smuts are good and the novel satisfies the evil character. The character design of Logan the MC needs a little more exposure than Kevin, which I hope the author will do in the near future. Chapter 23 was pretty good and looking forward to how the author will improve.

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MaMaMia3
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Battle_Bihari
Battle_BihariLv1

Well I have read All the chapters till 1st volume. And so far I have enjoyed the story. I like the way Mc conquers the ladies, and oh!! BTW I also read the 1st glossary of the story, Big brother you have written there that [{500 PWs = 1 Bonus chapter}] but I want to say that BRO your story has just started speeding it's viewers so can you keep value of PWs at range like.... 20 PWs = 1 Bonus chapter 35 PWs = 2 Bonus chapters 50 PWs = 3 Bonus chapters

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Red_dragon
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Thananos
ThananosLv14

Author-san said rate 5 stars, so I rated 5 stars 🌟. 🙃😁

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dylan_pyle
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Netaram_Rajak
Netaram_RajakLv4

the plotline is good and interesting, so author plz update the novel and don't stop the novel

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Mr_Rover
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overall it is nice and good but author keeps on dragging academy thing( entering academy ) from 35- till now(as of 69) ....

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