Review Detail of Dontlookdown in Another Virtual Reality Trash Novel

The writing in this novel is one of the best you will find on WN, and I mean it. It is fluid, with plenty of description. The pacing is also well-thought-out. As a novel, this makes it stand out on its own. For world-building, it is acceptable. It is another story set inside a VR game (as advertised), and nothing is drastically different from other novels of this genre. The MC is also as advertised: a useless scumbag. The author does use this for comedic purposes, and I would argue that he does okay at that. Only 8 chapters are currently up, so not much time for character development as of yet. The main issue that I see is the lack of redeemable traits, but that could change later in the novel. It could not change much either, but this won't be a big issue if the comedy remains fresh and does not get old. Overall, I would recommend this novel. My review may come off as harsh to some readers, but this is a critical take on the work. It is a good novel that can stand on its own merit, and I enjoyed reading the story.