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Davros92
Davros92Lv52yr
2022-08-03 11:07

The biggest problem is the fixation on crazy gyms and tournaments and the constant search for recognition by people who literally don't matter.

I've Activated The Hidden Path of Beast Evolution

Pikachu
3.1
226 Chs

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LadyBell
LadyBellLv15

about chapter 112, there is a huge story gap. seems to be missing a few chapters of info

2yr

AAA001
AAA001Lv10

"hidden evolutian" yet in the end only using already eksisting templete. bird go to phoenix. lizard, fish and snake go to dragon. fyi "dragon likes snake" not "snake likes dragon", because dragon is just imajinary creature based on snake.

2yr
Rex_Lindsay
Rex_LindsayLv15

Book is ok feels more needs to be done on Character development. Feels rushed need to slow down and develop interactions otherwise I'm enjoying this novel.

2yr
uflesh940
uflesh940Lv3

Beast taming but with even less originality than usual.

2yr
BLACK_KIRITO
BLACK_KIRITOLv4

raw link please.......................... . . . . . . . . . .. . . . .. . . .... ... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .

2yr
CarsonRome_432
CarsonRome_432Lv3

Writing Quality is actually ok for me. But almost everything else is all wrong. Cheat is kinda weird. It says evolution but it says hidden evolution but still the standard lizard to snake to python to flood dragon to blah blah blah template. Classic sparrow bird template. And for his second beast he just had to get a cloud mist beast that publicly only has a Level three potential leading to another few rounds of underestimation and mocking from enemies and face slapping from the MC. No depth, No originality, nothing fascinating and no twist and turns. No tension, no charm, bland and lacks relativity and creativity. And the funny thing is that this book still had more than 16k Powerstone supporting it. Ain't that funny? way more than the leading book on the Powerstone rankings. And it's absolute garbage. World background is lacking. All experienced readers, prepare to lose some brain cells if you read this. Cliche lines, cliche plot, very predictable. My final evaluation, Author is terrible at writing with zero innovation. Unless of course this is just a trial read and the author isn't taking this seriously.

2yr
Sean_Atkinson
Sean_AtkinsonLv15

The story after Ch117 stops making sense. There are too many gaps, name, and pet changes without explanation. Some name changes may be related to translation errors, Shen Miao to Shen Yi.

2yr
Size_name
Size_nameLv1

How many floors should a bag of rice stand, how many floors should a bag of rice stand, how much should you pay for a bag of rice, how much should a bag of rice be washed, each grain is muddy, who gave you a bag of rice! Spicy Tiansai! ! !

2yr
generically
genericallyLv14

This don’t even make sense evolution wise L.

2yr
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