Review Detail of asdafh1241564 in A Loner Inside The Novel

I think I am already late to write my 'shameless author review'. This novel tells the story of a boy who loses his interest, trust and hope in people. He dies and is sent into the novel he read. But, in this second life, he avoids others because of his experiences from his previous life. At least he tries to... I am and probably will be writing this novel just for the sake of writing it. Of course, this doesn't mean I don't need your feedbacks. This is my first novel and I have no writing experience. On top of that, I am not a native speaker. So you may find some plot holes, grammar mistakes, etc. This novel is greatly inspired by TAPOV (The Author's POV). However, I will try to change it and make it more original. But don't expect a masterpiece like TAPOV.