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Miegoreng
MiegorengLv72yr
2022-08-16 11:22

Full of nonsense! so many plot hole i have ever read on this site, so many dumb decision MC make, its not even funny what choice he made, just turn off your brain reading this!

[DXD] A Primordial’s journey in the Multiverse

Spabsta
3.9
30 Chs

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Spabsta
SpabstaAuthor

Boutta cry

2yr
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Xenofage
XenofageLv4

Think you turned your brain off while writing this 🧐

2yr
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Ireallylikereading
IreallylikereadingLv4

yo author-san although i havent started reading yet but can you please tell me if what he said is true or if he was just being mean/blunt. im also a huge cute loli fan so i really wanna know if hes speaking the truth when saying that this is for brain-dead people

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BruhGodKing
BruhGodKingLv3

Sigh...You made MC too much OP and yet he is one who is running behind the girls rather than them getting attracted more towards him, that's the problem in nowadays fics authors make mc stupidity powerful while their goal is to bang woman and become their chained dogs. Though the writing quality was still good so a star for that, a star for being a shameless man(you know why).

2yr

Chuluo
ChuluoLv14

It’s just a copy of phoenix in DxD but worse, while in the original you could understand the characters here they are full of plotholes. in phoenix in DxD she has a reason to fight Ophis she was a goddess of chaos and had learned to fight for thousand years but here he’s just a random guy who reincarnate and the first thing he do is go fight a loli who has just born because she didn’t give him the time of the day. Plus he has massive ego saying things like ‘you dare’ or ‘this king’ I cringed.

2yr
Fuckyall
FuckyallLv14

so farr this Fanfic is awesome. But please don't Ruin this Ff like when Someone insult please kill them or disable that person. Also It would be even more awesome if our MC will not act like a Real hero and goes save people. (He can help and save people from the chat room but other nahh) (Like this comment if you wanted this too)

2yr
Emanuel_Manu
Emanuel_ManuLv4

you just copied all the ideas from another ff the phoenix ff and just changed some things and thats it and now you ask for ideas now that you copied all that is to copy and that from another bad ff . ( sorry for my bad english)

2yr
InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

"God gives me wishes" story. ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ......

2yr
Spabsta
SpabstaAuthor

Bleep —————— ‘Mmmm Llllyvuvuvyvubibuvvuvyvyvybhbhubuvubhbhbhbbhhbhbhbbhhbhbbhbhhbhbbuhb

2yr
ultimategod
ultimategodLv4

this best dxd fanfic I ever read so author don't drop it pls pls [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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ven_ren
ven_renLv3

pedo novel...................................

2yr
Iterna
IternaLv4

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