Review Detail of RaidenSama in One Piece - My Adventure with Strawhats

Item: One Piece - My Adventure with Strawhats
Rating: 2.8

Review detail

RaidenSamaLv41yrRaidenSama

I stopped after a chapter. A paragraph for a chapter seriously? I dont know if the story is good or not. Grammer is ok i guess. But its a notch in the novel if the chapter is hardly 300-500 words a piece and it hurts the continuity of the story. So good luck on your future endeavours authors but I've already gone biased towards this novel and not gonna read the rest .

One Piece - My Adventure with Strawhats

Parv_gaming

Liked it!

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Parv_gamingAuthorParv_gaming

well the chapter you are talking about is chapter 1 and that chapter was the first thing I ever wrote in this app and I will not change it, even though I know that replacing it will give me more views but I just can't abandon my first work ever

1yr

Parv_gamingAuthorParv_gaming

but I would like if you could read just the second chapter and even after that you think my work is trash then it's ok I guess

1yr