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2022-09-04 12:18

I can't express the joy of seeing a young girl at the age of 14 putting this novel together. Her writing quality is just perfect, especially her tenses are in place how sequential events are unfolded just marvels me. I will encourage her to continue and let's see how the story ends.

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