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2023-08-18 17:54

I personally wouldn't recommend this fanfic to someone. The grammar is so horrendous that I felt like I had a stroke just reading the first 5 chapters. The spacing is inconsistent, the capitalization is all over the place, and the punctuation is an absolute mess. Some of the sentences were even cut short and were on a completely different paragraph than the one it started on. Author, I suggest you use grammarly or any sort of grammar checking application before uploading the chapter.Next is dialogue. Not only is the dialogue riddled with the same grammatical errors as the other texts, it is also incredibly hard to tell who is actually speaking.Then, there is also spelling. There isn't much to say in this one. The fanfic is plagued with spelling mistakes.Last but not least, power scaling. Anos has already been scaled to Low 1-A , while Rimuru was scaled to at most High 2-A. That should be enough to prove who's stronger. If you want to fight me on this, don't.Overall, pretty bad fanfic riddled with mistakes and errors. 1/10.

"Demons Bond" • Tensura X Maou Gakuin No Futekigousha

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This novel is very interesting in my opinion. The plot is good and the relationship between Rimuru and Anos is well paced. It does contain some mistakes but it doesn't stop it from being enjoyable [img=update][img=recommend]

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I wanted to read something like this fora while can't wait for new chapters.i have very high hopes for this keep it up.until the next chapter comes I am going to make my own version of this in my mind while you done the chapter's.

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Bookworm_Douluo
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its simply trash, the eenglish here is bad the story makes no sense, rimuru is also def stronger than anos much stronger in fact especially the place from the story you took him in. The gender change for rimuru also makes no sense he should 100% be able to change it himself even after reincarnation overall i can only find bad things about that, though the 5* are only because of the original stories

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I dropped it, rimuru turned out to be a female. Bahahabababbaahjajabakakksjxiksnsnajajajahahahabaajajajahahahahhwhjahhshwhwwhwwhhwhhahahahahahahahjaajajajajajajja

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