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TreacherousVoid
TreacherousVoidLv132yr
2023-01-31 06:10

Decent novel with garbage upload schedule. Average grammar, randomly plummets at times. Enjoying the plot but the MC is immensely paranoid and 90% of each chapter is him having internal monologues where the authors attempts to make him come across as smart and calculating. When in reality…the situations are never that deep or confusing and hes just doing WAY too much. Other than that I’m still here for the ride. Nothing has really happened in 6 chapters so I cant say much about world building.

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