Man, it would've been more awesome if the translator fixed the little details that the OG author gives on the Raw Novel... Writing Quality Grammar Lot of Errors Out of Context Proverbs The Layout of each paragraph and sentences are all fine. Story Development These can be fixed with a little bit detailing of the scenarios and the thoughts of characters should be tone down or better yet removed then replaced with narration from the perspective of the translator (ie you the one who have the idea of posting it here) Character Design Lack of Detailing on particular manner On the bright side it was patched on later chaps. Updating Stability Considering its and MTL Translation so naturally the updating of this ff are quick World Background Once again the lack of details considering the thoughts of MC is the one building the foundation of the story
Liked by 15 people
LIKENo replies. Be the first!