The author has experience with writing, so its enjoyable to read. The pace of the story is perfect and the mc is interesting with flaws that dont annoy you, but still with room for character develop(e?)ment. Author updates every day, unless smth important comes up, so no problems there. The home world is interesting unlike many chat groups, and the character interactions are some of the best I've read in fanfics. Now onto the highlight, HAYASAKA IS FINALLY GETTING SOME LOVE

The MC is insecure, nervous, cowardly, pessimistic, denies his personality and according to how he is different each chapter possibly suffers from multiple personality disorder. Personally, I don't like the story and although the author diminished these flaws as in chapter 60 (I think) it was a bit forced because it was just a talk with his father (with whom he shows almost no emotional bond) and it's already a bit more passable. Also, for those possibly coming in from the cover, Hayasaka only appears until chapter 50 and so far where I'm going (chapter 67) there is no progression emotionally (although I agree that relationships are best to take some time to write it well). So even though some people may like this story I find it a bit boring, this is my personal thought but I also know someone else may have a different opinion and I respect that. Anyway, author, I wish you the best and that you can continue writing the story as you have done so far without getting discouraged because some people don't like it as much (as in my case), knowing how difficult it is to write a story. Happy day 👍🏽 (translator)

It's a very good fanfic. I recommend whoever's reading this review to give it a try. I'm pretty sure you will like it. And if you don't that's your opinion. And author, please don't drop, I really like this story and will continue giving power stones.

its good novel that have potential because author writing is good, unfortunately just had to make mc murderer, and its one of murder that many normal people don't like that is murder because anger. not because survival or self protection, but he kill because trash talk. and many wise/idiot would ask why its bad? because if you are a gamer, you must experience trash talk and there is also many mc trash talk..

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Definitivamente passei raiva lendo isso, tanto com os erros de gramática quanto com a personalidade do Mc................................................

Okay...how to explain this? First of all, this book is just 'wow' for me. This book probably has all the fiction that I love with all my heart which also includes a certain manhwa, that you guys might have read before. MC's personality is good for me, considering he is not an edgy teenager and is actually a caring individual. The story pace is great. I am currently in chapter 31 and this is an achievement considering I was really not that hooked on a book like this for a while before reading this. The harem part, well there is no girlfriend for mc as of in chapter 31 which is kind of good in my eyes as I believe in slow romance and this book hopefully, provides that. I detest harem, but the author has made this book so much fun for me that I am able to read this without any problem and enjoy it as well. Last of all, I love this book very much author-san, and I hope you continue writing this and don't drop it. For those who are reading my review, I will recommend giving this a try. I am sure you are not going to regret it.

I AM LOVING IT............................................................................ Author pls don't drop this fanfic....................................... There are not many fanfic about re zero........................

Here's my review on this amazing fanfic, it's a must read umu! Writing Quality: It's very good, almost free from any grammatical errors. There are some things I don't like in the writing personally, like how it's supposed to be a POV but in reality there really is no POV. It's all third person. Fights are also written quite well and are very technical even if it's fictional. Story Development: It's quite slow in development but it's done well. All I am saying is that it's not boring, something is happening in every chapter so it keeps readers entertained. Will like to see the group chat in the story more in the future. Character Design: They are well done. Updating Stability: Updates are quite stable imo. World Background: It's quite an extensive world background mixing many different anime, webtoon, manga verses. But it's done in a tasteful manner that I can't really find any flaws in it. Then again I don't know about some of those anime so I might not be the best judge for it.