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xevers
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yes mc is smart in making plans, choices and a positive person. the development of the story is fast but does not leave the focus of the story which is to be the best ninja and there are no more annoying events. the other character is ok but should be deepened and yes there are plot holes how he changes and the author just closed it by making the 4th hokage as a mc role but the detail is still not enough to explain how the mc got an average person's iq for the age of 7 and the author closes it with mc studying history and that makes sense but what doesn't make sense is how the people around him accepted the change of mc too quickly and information that is not in the canon is made by the author very confusing to the reader because it is not in the canon. this is a fanfic,and for me thats ok because as long as there is a point that makes sense and the details are still there, it is good to read and one of the best for naruto fanfic in webnovel. keep going writer, your novel is made well to read .tq,dont drop and dont harem

The Best Shinobi

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Azathoth2
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is this a harem??

xevers
xeversLv1xevers

for the latest chapter there is no romance or mc love and there is no harem and the story focuses on being the best ninja

Azathoth2:is this a harem??