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Bob_Uchiha_XDLv42yr
2022-12-17 06:58

2/5 Writing quality is good, the story is.. mehh. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

Prince of the Desert

Eden_of_Kovir
4.5
128 Chs

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Eden_of_Kovir
Eden_of_KovirAuthor

English is my third lenguague so apologizes for any grammar or typo mistake. Also please leave a review if you liked it. I will be posting at least 2 or 3 chapters every week.

2yr

Spamifico
SpamificoLv13

The story is so slow paced that you can literally skip to the end and nothing of importance would’ve happened, and surprisingly that got worse on the last few chapters that have been turned into lore dumps. And while the story is well written and the grammar is good, the chapters are painfully short and nothing of note ever happens, it’s like reading a slice of life in the GOT world without it actually being good. I would wait until there’s at least 100 to start reading this again cause at the pace we’re going right now that’s what it’ll take for the story to actually progress.

2yr
YoDaddy
YoDaddyLv4

I want to read this but the Author just introduces too many character too quickly by name and relation to one another, I have to put in the effort to memorize them so that I can keep up which is not worth it, after all, people read Fanfics to relax.

2yr
Pythia
PythiaLv11

Great in terms of writing and grammar, but, the pacing is terribly slow to the point i get bored reading because nothing is really happening.

2yr
Monarch_freereader
Monarch_freereaderLv14

This GoT and harry potter fanfic is one of the great once i red . Even only having a few chapters. I hope this novel continues and be finished not like others ive been reading like stopping in the middle of the story. Its just grrrrr when its on the.good part.. Keep it up author this is a good one. More chapters wohooo

2yr
YoureABum
YoureABumLv1

decent story. both GoT fanfics of this author have terrible character growth catalyst events. very cliche and abrupt. a happy loving child goes full blown emo revenge monster after a tragic event. its cheesy and lazy writing. Now he's the cold pragmatic protagonist that shows no mercy to his enemies and stays neutral to everything except what benefits him. haha the same as every other MC on this app. Honestly other than that the story is amazing. grammar is great, the premise awesome, the kingdom building unique and entertaining. It falls short in character growth and overall just likeability of the MC. He went from positive, smart, charming, nice, and successful to.. well.. like every other MC you'll find above and below this story. you'll like the first 100 or so chapters though so id still give it a read and maybe you'll appreciate what I didn't.

1yr
majikss
majikssLv14

Very good quality when it comes to dialouge and grammar. I made it up until chat 37 until I had to drop it. For me it was incredibly slow and I think the author should've spent more time showing us how doran/harry thinks rather then him just watching tournaments for 20 chapters.

2yr
DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14

Story just started, might be too soon for a full review but 15+ chapter and I can already say I'm excited to read more. Unique start for a game of thrones fanfic, a well written, detailed backstory for the MC thats still ongoing, and good grammar. Keep up the good work.

2yr
Fito
FitoLv5

it seems like a story of noble mc with harry, it has a slow start but it seems that it will have magic and will soon grow, for the rest it seems like good writing and clear logic, it seems that there will be navigation, I hope it means more trips and not only he stays in his territory.

2yr
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