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1AMLv112yr
2022-07-31 14:23

I only understood the nature of this novel after reading 4 chapters (with zero understanding). But after the author himself clarified about the novel within the chapters, I had to reread all from the start again. Really a unique type of storytelling, and such narrative structures are very rare to find. Cheers!

Go Home a Like Turtle

GenXPrays
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62 Chs

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I appreciate this criticism, from your point of view, as a reader and as an author of novels. I understand: "nature", referring to the genre. Rereading is an advantage of interest, appreciation and generosity among authors, as it was said: -A unique type of narration and rare narrative structures. I explain: I write by impulse of WPC slogan, what I know embodied in each of my novels, the preferred genre is: history, fantasy..., the narrative technique: it is like social essays of experiences lived in 25 to 50 years. As for the structures. I took the flight to go from a WPC #302 (Apocalypse) to a WPC #304 (Reunions of Life) and how a third WPC #306 (Academy) came in the alternation of 15 days, of which I already have the synopsis and the cover edited twice. The structure leads to forge a triology such that it resembles a system.

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1AMLv11

I have nothing but immense respect for your ambitious plans.

GenXPrays:I appreciate this criticism, from your point of view, as a reader and as an author of novels. I understand: "nature", referring to the genre. Rereading is an advantage of interest, appreciation and generosity among authors, as it was said: -A unique type of narration and rare narrative structures. I explain: I write by impulse of WPC slogan, what I know embodied in each of my novels, the preferred genre is: history, fantasy..., the narrative technique: it is like social essays of experiences lived in 25 to 50 years. As for the structures. I took the flight to go from a WPC #302 (Apocalypse) to a WPC #304 (Reunions of Life) and how a third WPC #306 (Academy) came in the alternation of 15 days, of which I already have the synopsis and the cover edited twice. The structure leads to forge a triology such that it resembles a system.
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I've read a few chapters into the book and it doesn't disappoint. The plot's straight forward and the grammatical construct of the story is just okay. A solid read. keep it up author!

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Hello author, An honest review from me... After reading first 5 chaps, I got a feeling that I should checkout your other works too... Love this work author. Honestly, I enjoyed reading it this far. I am expecting to continue to read. Highly recommanded...Keep going...👍👍👍🤗👍

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Greeeeeeeaaaaaaat job, at first when I started chapter 1, I thought of dropping it to be sincere but anyway I pushed myself to read because I had nothing to do but man...This is totally great, extremely greaat

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Your style of writing is unique, it's actually the first time I'm reading something like this. The use of animals characters to create something interesting is wow! Honestly, I didn't understand the storyline at first, but later did tho.

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I love the settings of your stories I must say. At first I couldn't capture what is all about until I get to chapter 4 which brought intuition to what is all about. I just love the fact that your words and sequence are always amazing.

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Verrryyyy unique story l must say.... Honestly when l have started to read it l couldn't understand what is happening there at all and thats what interest me a lot to know the exact story line..... Never read something like that before...Also how author give the prospective of the animal is also mind-blowing..... Keep it up... Best wishes from the heart 😘

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well, Dear author I never read something like this in a good way. what impresses me is it's not just from a human perspective but also the perspective of an animal and a plant. It's kinda unique. It show your wide and vast sight. I'm total into this novel to read it till the end.

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So 8 chaps in and the story idea is quite unique. The only problem is that the dialogue and grammar gets a bit confusing most times and you have to look twice to get the full idea. Aside from that, every other thing seem refreshing enough. I'll be on the look out for more chapters to see where the story goes🙂🙂

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