It sounds conceptually unique in a weird but good way, and the story follows as such, and I enjoy every bit of that element. Also, I have a question about "The Veil" factor in the story, where did you get the idea from? I remember something similar from a old show I used to watch, but I have a single memory of its name or what it was about.
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LIKEI just remembered for myself, it was the Percy Jackson Book Series, with their whole interaction with mortals and mythological elements creating a mist that makes them see differently.
Magecrafter:I think the Veil is a popular concept. I also can't really remember where I got it from I just thought of.it and felt it would be cool
Storyteller_0:I just remembered for myself, it was the Percy Jackson Book Series, with their whole interaction with mortals and mythological elements creating a mist that makes them see differently.
Storyteller_0:Yep, it performs essentially the exact same, but for different things.