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shilo_meska
shilo_meskaLv142yr
2022-07-28 15:49

I love this story concept so much and the wrighting quality is really good. I’m not really an expert on the English language or anything but I didnt notice any misspelled or incorrect words that would decrease the readability. Also vivid words that help visualization and immersion. The story progression so far is decent, bogging down the story by going over what he did every day through the time skips gets rid of unnecessary info that can slow down the story and make it less enjoyable too read. Another aspect that f the story I absolutely adore is the structure of the world.how the fables die when forgotten and how the have their own separate world. Usually I find it difficult to get into a system novel because they rarely ever touch upon how the Mc is getting stronger just from killing thing. Where is the system getting all that power too give it too the mc. the system in this novel from what I interpreted is mostly administrative in nature. As in they don’t don’t get their power from the system, the system just helps them focus and understand thier power. I love this novel and I sincerely hope it continues. Last but not least: cute and innocent little elves brutalizing people while smiling and giggling😂😂😂 gotta love that.

Rise Of Evil Santa

Magecrafter
4.9
98 Chs

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Magecrafter
MagecrafterAuthor

Thanks so much for this kind review. I appreciate it so much that I've decided to sticky it. I'm happy you're enjoying the read, and I'll make sure not to give up on this piece. Thank you for your support!

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Magecrafter
MagecrafterAuthor

Thanks for picking up this book to read. Just to explain a few things... to prepare you, readers, for what you're about to read. Santa Claus is the protagonist of this story, but I hope you all have open minds about it. The first few chapters contain a lot of info, but it's necessary. Rest assured, he doesn't remain a bearded old man forever. He has subordinates, a System, and quite a number of things, really... But that doesn't make things any easier or less interesting. Trust me, you're in for a treat. I give this novel Five Stars, not just because of my bias as an Author, but because I truly believe it deserves it. If you don't think so, kindly let me know in the comments... or by writing a review of your own to explain why. I welcome criticisms. I certainly hope you find this book to your liking, even though it's so very niche. Well, then, happy reading!

2yr

MoHeTbl
MoHeTblLv10

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE Too interesting. I need more [img=coins] [img=coins] [img=coins] [img=coins] [img=coins]

2yr
Old_Man_Sage
Old_Man_SageLv13

Wow best book I have read in a while! Keep up the good work. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

2yr
Idontknowshit2
Idontknowshit2Lv4

Overall a amazing read so far H Line 100 Line 150 Line 200 Line 250 Line 300

2yr
Daoist1qnqr5
Daoist1qnqr5Lv11

Very good, congratulations, I'm on 7, just one thing I didn't understand, I don't know if it will explain, but if the system had control, why didn't it control Sra Claus when he was talking to Santa Claus?

2yr
Unsightly
UnsightlyLv3

I feel like this has the potential to be a 600+ chapter novel it is not your normal fantasy novel, I hope this does well. ...jjjj.jsn.aj.sj.sjs.this dust fits free rd few txt were rd Dr ,rd deff CT TV xse,se,se,rs,extremely ford rcv

2yr
QueenRani6
QueenRani6Lv3

Yes! I gave it five stars! If you have read what I read, you would too. The name got me first, then the synopsis then the chapter. Gosh, I was hooked despite it being my first time reading this genre. Warning beforehand, the Santa we see at first is really annoying(I nearly strangled him several times) but it gets better if you just wait for it! I am definitely going to read more of this! Mage, you have impressed me!

2yr
killed_by_a_devil
killed_by_a_devilLv3

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2yr
Storyteller_0
Storyteller_0Lv4

It sounds conceptually unique in a weird but good way, and the story follows as such, and I enjoy every bit of that element. Also, I have a question about "The Veil" factor in the story, where did you get the idea from? I remember something similar from a old show I used to watch, but I have a single memory of its name or what it was about.

1yr
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