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2022-08-16 11:38

I was hyped for this ngl becuse of the reviews saying its good but I've stopped reading at the 2nd chapter. 1st chapter, the MC makes a choice that makes me question his intelligence. He chose to increase the difficulty, who in their right mind would do that, there's not even an explanation on why he did that. After that, he is suddenly thinking like what a normal person would. There's a whole character development arc missing in one chapter. 2nd chapter, the forced romance. Its so cringe lol The author is really laying it thick that Octavia and Clarke is a love interest for the MC, the romance is so unbelievably forced that Clarke just blushed because of an eye contact. There's even an interaction between Octavia and Arthur (MC) that will give any women the ick. Arthur's a literal white knight that gets bullied irl. There's also times where Arthur becomes non-existent when Canon characters interact with each other, no one would notice him when he talks lol.

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Onxio
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The MC is pretty cringe with his whole white knight attitude

RustyBoi
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Thx for the save

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