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2022-07-26 00:27

Ok I'll give this 5 Stars but I'm not here to talk about the story. I'm here to ask about the sypnosis. Is the MC the son of Poseidon or a Descendent of Poseidon cause let's be Honest here Spartans are not descended from Herakles. Only Leonidas and I feel like you watch FGO Absolute Demonic Front Babylonia and just decided to rush things without thinking through. Leonidas was the one who is descended from Herakles and even that is only by his words in Fate Lore. Look it up in the Wiki. It said that it is not sure if Leonidas is a descendent of Herakles or not

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TrapcardDAuthor

actually I don't watch much of fate at all. but the mc is a direct decendent of poseidon.

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Kaito_UzumakiLv4

bruh

TrapcardD:actually I don't watch much of fate at all. but the mc is a direct decendent of poseidon.
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TrapcardDAuthor

I mean I like it. it's just not one of my go to choices

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