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Average_DaoistLv42yr
2022-10-27 21:59

Goodt novel but the writing quality is not good. This novel needs an editor and some improvement from the author's side too. [img=exp][img=exp]

Legendary Bloodline Collector

Sage_X
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160 Chs

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Daniel_OxleyLv4

It has a amazing flow so far and the MC is quite refreshing it's nice to not have a good guy MC who always put himself at risk to save someone

2yr
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Arceus1803Lv3

The story is nice. The mc has actually been portrayed as evil. The childhood part was also good. The pace is great and the story doesn’ t feel rushed. More chapters would be preferable.

2yr
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Daoist0ccPtWLv14

Bro, stop it. This weft armor is thicker than adamantium. It's just wanting something that the system offers, now I understand a reader's statement saying that the system is the crutch of lazy authors

2yr
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ShadowKamishLv13

Is there going to be harem or no? thank u.

2yr
10
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petar_vincicLv4

The theme is good but are u for real a two year old going and killing, okey i understand its cultivation they develop faster no big deal , but oh boy the writing is terrible. Like a good third of sentances are butcherd and dont make any sense. I forced myself to get to premium chapters in hope author got sober but it just got worse. If this novel gets edited to look like some decent art u can coment soo i come back becose as I said the theme is interesting but before that i hope i can forget what I have read.

2yr
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GenXPraysLv3

If the parents treated him like a mental retard. It's what's in the "gene pack." But why in his new reincarnated life: didn't he die easy? (Absorb) Highlight that with only his first 20 chapters he has achieved 20,000 views... If they appreciate it, it's because it looks well done. Keep going... until you win!

2yr
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Aaron_Aguilera_2568Lv1

Reveal spoiler

2yr
4
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IzImLv13

My main issuie is grammar, the overall story is decent.

2yr
1
DaoistuBDitWLv4

I think it's good. But I got bored easily

2yr
1
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