Honestly, it's my first review so… well, it's not very good, but I think this story is worth it. Grammar 3.5/5: this part is a bit bad, the grammar is understandable but it has several visible errors like some words that do not match the sentence, etc. but in general it won't bother you much update stability 4/5: generally good, although the author does not have a fixed schedule but it does not take long between each update. development of the story 4/5: I'm liking how the story unfolds, although there are some things that don't quite convince me, like the other champion, honestly I'm not very interested, I had already forgotten it by the time they mentioned it again, there is nothing interesting, at least in my opinion, the author does it for the blessing of Hades but I don't think he really needs it, with what he has now he can become one of the strongest, besides the author does not put a clear goal for the protagonist (unless I forgot) Character design 2.5/5: not very good, that's all you need to know world background 3/5: so-so, borderline bad, the author has not really delved into the construction of the world, in addition to not even mentioning the other factions, so we do not know much about the world (although we have to wait, after of everything not even 30 chapters have passed) this review was translated from spanish with google translator, sorry for the mistakes
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