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2022-07-24 15:47

Muito bom, tem muito potencial, mas gostaria que explicasses melhor a aparência dos outros dois anéis espirituais do madara, uma imagem seria ainda melhor, e poderias dizer de que tipo de besta espiritual vieram os dois aneis dele (que agora são de mais de 2000 anos).

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