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SKY_K1NG
SKY_K1NGLv12yr
2022-12-14 11:58

Good story and I can't wait for more specialy that this is the first time I saw a fanfiction that reach this far in ARIFURETA novels

"My Destined One" • Tensura X Arifureta

VOIDKING
4.0
96 Chs

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AllenCross
AllenCrossLv1

Reveal spoiler

2yr

Takshak_Bodade
Takshak_BodadeLv2

Sir you are really amazing and using other anime character so properly I love that so much . And I am excited for rimuru's harem keep it up.

2yr
VOIDKING
VOIDKINGAuthor

HELLO EVERYONE AUTHOR HERE HOPE YOU GUYS ARE HAVING A GOOD TIME THANKS FOR READING.

2yr
Nicolas_Bahamondes
Nicolas_BahamondesLv2

bad idea carried out badly. Putting two protagonists that move together is stupid since one will be filler and the other will stand out more. up to here the story goes back to arifureta's novel which is stupid considering that they have a being that can travel between worlds whenever it wants

2yr
Abyss_Edge
Abyss_EdgeLv4

2 MC? Brothers at that? Recipe for a writer's block..... You have a lot of bots for reviewers I see.

1yr
Takshak_Bodade
Takshak_BodadeLv2

It's very good I like how story devlopment I am excited for luminous valentine's and kurumi , shiraori's entry new members in rimuru's harem keep it up and please don't drop this

2yr
Melitia_Snek
Melitia_SnekLv5

Writing Quality - ⭐⭐⭐ Story Development - ⭐ Character Design - ⭐⭐ Updating Stability - ⭐⭐⭐ World Background - ⭐⭐⭐⭐

2yr
Mafahl
MafahlLv1

you know what this looks fun, ima start reading it real quick.

2yr
Lordium
LordiumLv2

I’m going to be honest, the story is decent and it’s clear that the author spared a lot of efforts in creating this book, but there are quiet a few downsides. First of all, any person that even remotely knows how strong Rimuru is by the end of the story, will be severely disappointed by the fact that he was nerfed by a fair amount. The issue is clearly in the fact that the author simply does not posses the necessary knowledge or simply does not understand his power to a certain extent. Also, the grammar is decent, at most.

1yr
Spirit_Rimuru
Spirit_RimuruLv1

daam I can't wait for more chapter I wonder what will happened to Hinata.

2yr
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