Item: AWAKENED: THE BEAST SYSTEM
Rating: 4.6
Author: jeremiah_mabonga

jeremiah_mabongaLv11yr

2023-05-10 00:40

I really love how the author describes whats happening in the story, it's not too long or to short. I also like how the author doesn't take his time to get to the point, The story makes it worthy for me to read more chapters.

AWAKENED: THE BEAST SYSTEM

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