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2023-04-18 04:33

It hurts me that it is there restarting but I wish you the best😁😁😁😁😁😁👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👍😁👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👋👋💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪

Jack Hanma: True might [reworked]

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AbsoluteLoliLover
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The First Law of Fan Fiction: Every change which strengthens the protagonist requires a corresponding worsening of his challenges. Or, to put it plainly, you cannot make Harry Potter a Jedi without giving Lord Voldemort the Death Star. Read any book on writing and it will tell you that stories are all about conflict. A hero who is so strong that his conflicts are no longer problems is no longer in a story worth reading. The most fatal temptation of fan fiction is to think of how much easier your character's life would be if he was super-powered. We are naturally inclined to think of ways to solve our characters' problems for them. But first we much think of ways to make their lives more difficult. - Worldmaker.

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ShodaiKokyu
ShodaiKokyuLv13

Hey it's me again, you finally edited the earlier chapter and keep improving in the latest chapter. So i will delete my old review and give 5 stars now

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The_Rune_Raven
The_Rune_RavenLv4

Kengan Asura and Baki are rarely used stories so this is already a plus on top of that Jack is also a rare character as he inherited parts of the hanma bloodline baki didn't and vice versa so it's very neat especially if mc can awaken Jacks sight ability early

2yr
UchihaGOD
UchihaGODLv1

I hope you continue to write. more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

2yr
DeluxeOG
DeluxeOGLv15

The novel is great so far. pacing is good. interesting mc. well done author .................................................................

2yr
Devilboi1
Devilboi1Lv14

Honestly wasn’t expecting much with this book from the beginning but it’s just getting better and better, props to the author and hope u continue this book.

2yr
Johnny_G
Johnny_GLv15

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Tam132
Tam132Lv14

It's good. I like it.

2yr
Astravor
AstravorLv4

I really like the idea it's a cool and unique story author improves after the 2 chapter there are still some mistakes but I could deal with them perfectly fine

2yr
LemonZawodowiec
LemonZawodowiecLv5

Once upon a time this writer made this fanfic. it had a good amount of chapters and had good quality. but for whatever reason said writer decided delete all chapters and rewrite the story... but he didn't break into double digits of chapters... maybe this time it will be different? better even? ----- as they say, third time a charm... so i will give you 4 stars on credit...

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