Review Detail of Random_0P_Being in Reincarnate as Yukari Yakumo, the Gap Youkai
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The idea is great but the way it's written is bad let me point out some of the problems 1) theirs no explanation about mc powers 2) the Mc personality did a 180 from an average girl as the author says to now a mischievous and playful personality 3) the author messed up with how he made the wish I think he wanted the mc to have Yukari powers and experience but when she was transmigrated the author kinda overrated the personality of the mc into that of yukaris 4) the Mc just reaches the dd world and right off goes messing around? It's off-putting like there is nothing original about the mc
Reincarnate as Yukari Yakumo, the Gap Youkai
Lazy_Sovereign
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I'more surprised you didn't immediately make her join Rias' Peerage. Its great to have a fanfic that is not a copy of original with an extra character.
Lazy_Sovereign:1.) I already talked about the MC's strength when she fought Vali. Basically, she can manipulate all [boundary]. She could manipulate her and others' [boundary]. 2) Of course, her personality will change. She is just an average girl, and she merges with the experience and memories of Yukari, who is over 2000. Of course, her personality is more dominant towards Yukari. 3) the same answer with no.2 4) Likes in Synopsis MC likes to prank other people, and Yukari's experience makes her personality stand out more. Yukari is described as a Youkai, which is like a Youkai. Basically, she likes pranks and is lazy.
1.) I already talked about the MC's strength when she fought Vali. Basically, she can manipulate all [boundary]. She could manipulate her and others' [boundary]. 2) Of course, her personality will change. She is just an average girl, and she merges with the experience and memories of Yukari, who is over 2000. Of course, her personality is more dominant towards Yukari. 3) the same answer with no.2 4) Likes in Synopsis MC likes to prank other people, and Yukari's experience makes her personality stand out more. Yukari is described as a Youkai, which is like a Youkai. Basically, she likes pranks and is lazy.