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Dao_Master_Penguin
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Hello I’m here for a shameless review! Plus I wanted to inform those that review my fanfic about honesty. I don’t mind negative reviews As long as it’s truthful. With that being said if you have any negative views about the fanfic please give explanations on why you do. So that I can work on them and try to fix it going forward. I won’t delete any reviews unless they are verbally hurtful or someone obviously trolling! Please no bot reviews, positive or negative. It isn’t fair to authors who are genuinely trying to write a story! Thank you to everyone who reviews the fanfic! Positive or negative!

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Naruto : I received a system shop!!

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LORD_sKY
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Check out Naruto: Time Manipulation yes I'm the author and I have no shame in promoting it

XtrEEm
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Quick question. Spoiler are you going to force him in a marriage with hinata or is that only going to be a attempt and mc is not going to accept it?

Dao_Master_Penguin
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Well let’s say a little of both? Although Zasu ’may’ accept the marrige he will not ‘force’ hinata into anything (unless she wants it) 😏

XtrEEm:Quick question. Spoiler are you going to force him in a marriage with hinata or is that only going to be a attempt and mc is not going to accept it?
XtrEEm
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But that would make no sense for her to want to be with him as she is already in love with Naruto.

Dao_Master_Penguin:Well let’s say a little of both? Although Zasu ’may’ accept the marrige he will not ‘force’ hinata into anything (unless she wants it) 😏
Dao_Master_Penguin
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That’s why you read the story to find out ☺️

XtrEEm:But that would make no sense for her to want to be with him as she is already in love with Naruto.
Ryofu
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Well, with that answer I'll probably put the reading of the story on hold until It's known if Hinata is in the Harem or not. Hinata, like some others, have far more potential to let her end up with Naruto. I alwayse saw her love for Naruto as too forced that it became anoying. In general, most of the younger generation "love" where farfetch and illogical in the original story xD. (saw this comment after reading the last chapter...)

Dao_Master_Penguin:That’s why you read the story to find out ☺️
Dao_Master_Penguin
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She’s in the harem lol

Ryofu:Well, with that answer I'll probably put the reading of the story on hold until It's known if Hinata is in the Harem or not. Hinata, like some others, have far more potential to let her end up with Naruto. I alwayse saw her love for Naruto as too forced that it became anoying. In general, most of the younger generation "love" where farfetch and illogical in the original story xD. (saw this comment after reading the last chapter...)
Chaos_Order8
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Author san... U said that the mc powers are all about poison and seal and all. But aren't this to normal for mc"s power, we need more destruction for a ability. A great kikaie genkai, a unique one u created, not in the original. Of course all of this If I understand right from the u said in entro.