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Little_feelings
Little_feelingsLv21yrLittle_feelings

You started well, that i can say but one thing i noticed that you use a lot of tautologies. "What on earth brought you to my house? She said to him, not she asked him. There are things I don't have time to point about, but one more thing is your update schedule is really poor

Sphinx

KingPablo

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KingPablo
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It is completed. I only upload when I have a finished manuscript, hence the time span for the last update. I will work on the errors. Thanks for your opinion.