Review Detail of TheChosenCum in When I Saw The Returns, I Invested In My Future Wife First

this one is very entertaining. how the characters develop feels quite natural and not forced, although their love is a bit extreme. everytime I finish a chapter I want to read the next one. the development of their personal lives isnt overshadowed. although the system is largely overlooked after ch20 which is a shame, and the speed of time isnt really explained well, as well as other side characters are mostly left in the dust. all of which I dont care about because it leaves me more chapters of the mc and his girl, which is good in my opinion. overall a really enjoyable read.