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WorthyAdversary
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2022-07-12 12:57

This is the author's shameless review! If you guys find any mistakes, just comment on them and I'll fix it in a day. Thanks for reading! Also, if you guys have any questions, just reply to this post and I'll answer them as early as possible, I just won't reveal any spoilers.

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Heavenly_Terror
Heavenly_TerrorLv4

Is there any romance or harem?

WorthyAdversary
WorthyAdversaryAuthor

I have no idea yet, I'll probably hold a vote or something. Or maybe, after I get far enough into the story, I'll have the clear picture of his romance in my head, because right now, Gojo cares about nothing but death and playing around, so...

Heavenly_Terror:Is there any romance or harem?
leo26
leo26Lv12

Yeah it's better to flesh out his character and the world around him before deciding that.

WorthyAdversary:I have no idea yet, I'll probably hold a vote or something. Or maybe, after I get far enough into the story, I'll have the clear picture of his romance in my head, because right now, Gojo cares about nothing but death and playing around, so...
NoOb_MaStEr_690000
NoOb_MaStEr_690000Lv4

dude i feel having shinsu + cursed energy will be too OP. maybe he can use cursed energy like shinsu now or something. or he can extract negative shinsu. like bro ive seen many novels where the author adds too many powers to the MC which makes everything so confusing. like gojo is OP with just the simple infinity + reverse cursed + purple. Anyays good luck it seems pretty interesting, hopefully you dont drop it

WorthyAdversary
WorthyAdversaryAuthor

So yeah, uhm, lemme add a new tag to the novel and a disclaimer. Also, his powers will be fairly simple, as the powers from jujutsu are pretty simple, with the main ones being enhanced physical strength, superior marital arts, blue, red, and purple. On the other hand, his powers for shinsu will also be pretty simple as a wave controller, I just won't go deeper into this now as that'll give out spoilers.

NoOb_MaStEr_690000:dude i feel having shinsu + cursed energy will be too OP. maybe he can use cursed energy like shinsu now or something. or he can extract negative shinsu. like bro ive seen many novels where the author adds too many powers to the MC which makes everything so confusing. like gojo is OP with just the simple infinity + reverse cursed + purple. Anyays good luck it seems pretty interesting, hopefully you dont drop it
WorthyAdversary
WorthyAdversaryAuthor

Just added the disclaimer. Read it and see if you want to continue with the story or not.

NoOb_MaStEr_690000:dude i feel having shinsu + cursed energy will be too OP. maybe he can use cursed energy like shinsu now or something. or he can extract negative shinsu. like bro ive seen many novels where the author adds too many powers to the MC which makes everything so confusing. like gojo is OP with just the simple infinity + reverse cursed + purple. Anyays good luck it seems pretty interesting, hopefully you dont drop it
xCyber_
xCyber_Lv3

Lol_2050
Lol_2050Lv14

I hope you do add romance at some point. Emotionless robot mcs are boring.

WorthyAdversary:I have no idea yet, I'll probably hold a vote or something. Or maybe, after I get far enough into the story, I'll have the clear picture of his romance in my head, because right now, Gojo cares about nothing but death and playing around, so...
shadowmonarchfan12
shadowmonarchfan12Lv4

this is an interesting idea I'm looking forward to it when it comes out

WorthyAdversary
WorthyAdversaryAuthor

Thanks, I'm working on hammering down all the ideas right now until I get it all flowing smoothly.

shadowmonarchfan12:this is an interesting idea I'm looking forward to it when it comes out
Sun_Dragon
Sun_DragonLv3

I have no criticism but I can give you some advice make sure you don't give him supernatural abilities having gojo's powers is useless to a certain extent if you don't fight as he is more focused on destroying................ ................................................................ ................................................................ ................................................................ ................................................................ ................................................ give him a system of "the best striker in the world" that of skills with perfect control that is self-explanatory or perfect aim is only a tip you can integrate the system in the first game

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